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I don't know how I should tell you
Maybe it's one of those things better left unsaid
This is my way of keeping this in
I wish I could tell you everything
5th line, I'm already out of words
©2005-2009 ~crypticpoet
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I don't even know where this came from. I sat down tonight, I started writing this as a song. Then I stopped and I forgot what I was getting at. I forgot that I was writing it; who it was about. But when I look at it, I get these strange feelings. I don't even know.
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i think it's very cute. =D
i like that 5th line! It has a certain air of elegant posteriority (i made that word up, i think) which really rounds up the whole as a brill' finale :)

...though i'd like to have seen where it was leading too <__< it started out awesomely...
this is fantastic!!!! its os original...its like an accident that just turns out to be a massively awesome...thing!!!!!! +fav, all the way.

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I know...

I just kinda...stopped and lost the feeling to it. But now when I look at it...I dunno.

Anyway the word "Posteriority"....did it, by any chance, originate from the word "Posterior"? If so...

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....yeah.

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Heh. Same type of thing as my latest poem...

Nice, good job. :D :hug: I like it.

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Interesting. I dont really think it needs anymore. I've had that happen to me. Except I only got five words not lines. Sufice to say, it didn't turn out as well as yours.

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in the sense of the word that means:

n. The buttocks.

...then yes :D that is what i was thinking of when i said it. but like i don't know how that fits in with the sentence, although that whole sentence was kind of nonsensical anyoo.

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